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		<title>Comment on The Use of Flashbacks by Greg St. Pierre</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/2009/09/12/the-use-of-flashbacks/comment-page-1/#comment-247</link>
		<dc:creator>Greg St. Pierre</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 02:41:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In my current project, I&#039;m mulling a scene which, oddly, is both flashback and dream sequence. My protag is a British fighter-pilot in the Battle of Britain, in which Britain&#039;s small Air Force kept Hitler from invading.

The strain of day-to-day fighting is taking its toll. My pilot returns to his parents&#039; home on a short leave to attend his sister&#039;s wedding, after which he sleeps in his old room. 

The ensuing dream sequence involves remembering how his father took him out as a young boy to teach him to shoot in the field behind the house. But the ground begins to rumble. A shot rings out, and, horribly, his father goes down. Suddenly, German tanks and soldiers emerge from the forest. A tank fires on the house, destroying it. My protag wakes with a start, and fresh resolve, since invasion was a very real possibility and had of course already occurred throughout much of Europe.

I think this meets all the criteria for a flashback, as it actually reveals where the protag&#039;s first-rate shooting skills stemmed from. But I can&#039;t say I&#039;ve seen anyone combine flashback AND dream sequence, so if there&#039;s a reason I shouldn&#039;t do it I&#039;d like to know. Anyway, great article. Opinions?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In my current project, I&#8217;m mulling a scene which, oddly, is both flashback and dream sequence. My protag is a British fighter-pilot in the Battle of Britain, in which Britain&#8217;s small Air Force kept Hitler from invading.</p>
<p>The strain of day-to-day fighting is taking its toll. My pilot returns to his parents&#8217; home on a short leave to attend his sister&#8217;s wedding, after which he sleeps in his old room. </p>
<p>The ensuing dream sequence involves remembering how his father took him out as a young boy to teach him to shoot in the field behind the house. But the ground begins to rumble. A shot rings out, and, horribly, his father goes down. Suddenly, German tanks and soldiers emerge from the forest. A tank fires on the house, destroying it. My protag wakes with a start, and fresh resolve, since invasion was a very real possibility and had of course already occurred throughout much of Europe.</p>
<p>I think this meets all the criteria for a flashback, as it actually reveals where the protag&#8217;s first-rate shooting skills stemmed from. But I can&#8217;t say I&#8217;ve seen anyone combine flashback AND dream sequence, so if there&#8217;s a reason I shouldn&#8217;t do it I&#8217;d like to know. Anyway, great article. Opinions?</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Nature of Conflict by Jackie Wolf-Enrione</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jackie Wolf-Enrione</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Jul 2010 20:45:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Conflict is the motivating force behind a good screenplay.  Conflict drives this writer to continue telling her story.  One cold day in January , 2010 in the Tarrytown Post Office, a chance meeting inspired me to take an obscure character in my story, and make him my lead. And in six short months, a story I had been struggling with since 2000, literally and remarkably wrote itself in six short months. 
 A recent interview sent me back to include a vital aspect of the tangled web. Threading the story line throughout while maintaining conflict to its logical conclusion or resolution is a challenge. Well. This has been a an incredible journey. I&#039;ve grown fond of my main characters. Next week for beTter or for worse, . Sending this out to the person who was the catalyst, making my screenplay come to life. No guts no glory!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Conflict is the motivating force behind a good screenplay.  Conflict drives this writer to continue telling her story.  One cold day in January , 2010 in the Tarrytown Post Office, a chance meeting inspired me to take an obscure character in my story, and make him my lead. And in six short months, a story I had been struggling with since 2000, literally and remarkably wrote itself in six short months.<br />
 A recent interview sent me back to include a vital aspect of the tangled web. Threading the story line throughout while maintaining conflict to its logical conclusion or resolution is a challenge. Well. This has been a an incredible journey. I&#8217;ve grown fond of my main characters. Next week for beTter or for worse, . Sending this out to the person who was the catalyst, making my screenplay come to life. No guts no glory!</p>
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		<title>Comment on MY SUPER EX-GIRLFRIEND by Gabriel Ellis</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/2009/09/12/my-super-ex-girlfriend/comment-page-1/#comment-244</link>
		<dc:creator>Gabriel Ellis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Jul 2010 17:11:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Uma Thurman was like a thousand times drop dead gorgeous when she was still younger.&#039;&quot;.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Avatar by Alethea</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/2010/02/17/avatar/comment-page-1/#comment-243</link>
		<dc:creator>Alethea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jun 2010 01:51:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The imagery of hometree was like a balm for my senses. I longed to visit a forest cathedral like that. 

Human beings and the environment are all connected with fragile ties. It&#039;s frightening.  This movie illustrated how quickly that can be untied. It&#039;s spooky.

It reminds me of the Gulf. The pain there arrives every night with the news. It&#039;s the same cycle getting deeper.-- groundwater pollution, Chernobyl, toxins in the rivers, and now oil that will travel to who knows where.

The damage this time isn&#039;t digestible though because it&#039;s a behemoth monster that vomiting. I mourne that because I didn&#039;t get to Gulf side of Florida enough. It will never be the same and I didn&#039;t get to see enough of it before now.

A lot more humility is needed by those who think that they&#039;re invincible.  Do they realize that yet?

I&#039;m intrigued to read that James Cameron likes Mr. Fields book. I&#039;ve purchased many of his books. They have helped me a lot. I had my hands on Four Screenplays before I sat down to read articles here. I should have read it tonight instead of typing this.

Oops, this gives me motivation for digging into it next after I finish my current text on screenwriting.  

Hey, can i jerk the readers around?  Why don&#039;t they call in some scientists instead of James Cameron for a think tank on the Gulf Problem?

Duh,  He&#039;s an artist,writer, producer.  To everything there is a season. To everything there is a place. Solving an oil spill isn&#039;t his specialty,  When others with &quot;THE TRAINING&quot; in science, research, and technology are forgotten I become suspicious of the motivation of those in charge.  We&#039;re not that dumb.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The imagery of hometree was like a balm for my senses. I longed to visit a forest cathedral like that. </p>
<p>Human beings and the environment are all connected with fragile ties. It&#8217;s frightening.  This movie illustrated how quickly that can be untied. It&#8217;s spooky.</p>
<p>It reminds me of the Gulf. The pain there arrives every night with the news. It&#8217;s the same cycle getting deeper.&#8211; groundwater pollution, Chernobyl, toxins in the rivers, and now oil that will travel to who knows where.</p>
<p>The damage this time isn&#8217;t digestible though because it&#8217;s a behemoth monster that vomiting. I mourne that because I didn&#8217;t get to Gulf side of Florida enough. It will never be the same and I didn&#8217;t get to see enough of it before now.</p>
<p>A lot more humility is needed by those who think that they&#8217;re invincible.  Do they realize that yet?</p>
<p>I&#8217;m intrigued to read that James Cameron likes Mr. Fields book. I&#8217;ve purchased many of his books. They have helped me a lot. I had my hands on Four Screenplays before I sat down to read articles here. I should have read it tonight instead of typing this.</p>
<p>Oops, this gives me motivation for digging into it next after I finish my current text on screenwriting.  </p>
<p>Hey, can i jerk the readers around?  Why don&#8217;t they call in some scientists instead of James Cameron for a think tank on the Gulf Problem?</p>
<p>Duh,  He&#8217;s an artist,writer, producer.  To everything there is a season. To everything there is a place. Solving an oil spill isn&#8217;t his specialty,  When others with &#8220;THE TRAINING&#8221; in science, research, and technology are forgotten I become suspicious of the motivation of those in charge.  We&#8217;re not that dumb.</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Name is Khan by Daniela Jara</title>
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		<dc:creator>Daniela Jara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 May 2010 03:41:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on My Name is Khan by Leida Figueroa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leida Figueroa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 May 2010 19:40:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>firmado</description>
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		<title>Comment on My Name is Khan by Cristiam Banchon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cristiam Banchon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 May 2010 19:40:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>firmado</description>
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		<title>Comment on Avatar by Linda Randall</title>
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		<dc:creator>Linda Randall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 May 2010 23:25:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I was completely blown away by Avatar.  When I saw the trailer I said there was no way I&#039;d go see it.  Then when it stayed for a few weeks at the box office and made billions it got my interest. It was not only amazing in acting, but creativity, set, direction and dialog.  In fact most of the people at our theatre informed me they have been to see it several times.  I noticed it&#039;s out on DVD earlier then other movies, great plan!  GST credits and income tax, people will buy the DVDS to keep kiddies and adults occupied during the summer months.

The 3D effect of flying was just like in my dreams.  This is the first movie to make me really feel like I was flying in the air, it was exhilarating and well shot.  I can&#039;t wait to see it again.

As for James Cameron, he&#039;s a genius and from my home town and he was a personal friend of my boyfriends sister (they went to school together).
I remember when James was going to Niagara College in Welland and people were buzzing about his works in the papers years ago.  

A true talent to follow and dedicated to his work, he&#039;s an inspiration to many screenwriters, directors out there looking to start in the biz.

I loved his movie the Titanic and saw it at the theatre 5 times with 5 different people.  I even bought it and watched it for another 100 times.  Not only did I love the acting, but I loved the antique drawings and interior designs.  I actually have a large wall hanging of the original titanic and it&#039;s many compartments explained in graphic art.  

The movie concept of characters travelling by ship as immigrants, was an inspiration in the munroe series of novels that I&#039;ve been writing and posted on authonomy.com 

I&#039;ll bet James Cameron&#039;s movies will inspire thousands of people to love the art of the theatre again and to learn to write novels, plays and music.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was completely blown away by Avatar.  When I saw the trailer I said there was no way I&#8217;d go see it.  Then when it stayed for a few weeks at the box office and made billions it got my interest. It was not only amazing in acting, but creativity, set, direction and dialog.  In fact most of the people at our theatre informed me they have been to see it several times.  I noticed it&#8217;s out on DVD earlier then other movies, great plan!  GST credits and income tax, people will buy the DVDS to keep kiddies and adults occupied during the summer months.</p>
<p>The 3D effect of flying was just like in my dreams.  This is the first movie to make me really feel like I was flying in the air, it was exhilarating and well shot.  I can&#8217;t wait to see it again.</p>
<p>As for James Cameron, he&#8217;s a genius and from my home town and he was a personal friend of my boyfriends sister (they went to school together).<br />
I remember when James was going to Niagara College in Welland and people were buzzing about his works in the papers years ago.  </p>
<p>A true talent to follow and dedicated to his work, he&#8217;s an inspiration to many screenwriters, directors out there looking to start in the biz.</p>
<p>I loved his movie the Titanic and saw it at the theatre 5 times with 5 different people.  I even bought it and watched it for another 100 times.  Not only did I love the acting, but I loved the antique drawings and interior designs.  I actually have a large wall hanging of the original titanic and it&#8217;s many compartments explained in graphic art.  </p>
<p>The movie concept of characters travelling by ship as immigrants, was an inspiration in the munroe series of novels that I&#8217;ve been writing and posted on authonomy.com </p>
<p>I&#8217;ll bet James Cameron&#8217;s movies will inspire thousands of people to love the art of the theatre again and to learn to write novels, plays and music.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Evolution/Revolution by Linda Randall</title>
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		<dc:creator>Linda Randall</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 May 2010 23:17:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Robin Jay said I should take a look at your site when I asked who would be a great mentor for me with the romantic comedy action screenplay that I&#039;ve written during a script frenzy 2010 challenge.  I&#039;ll be listening to your podcasts on here and reading your notes.  I&#039;ll find your books too!

Once I do I&#039;ll be blogging about it on the idea girl says wordpress - my writers, book review blog. :)

I hope you have videos on youtube, I&#039;ll post them on my site as well.

Great layout on your site.  Some sites I visit are not easy to manage, this one&#039;s awesome. (give your page designer a pat on the back from me)

Cheers!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Robin Jay said I should take a look at your site when I asked who would be a great mentor for me with the romantic comedy action screenplay that I&#8217;ve written during a script frenzy 2010 challenge.  I&#8217;ll be listening to your podcasts on here and reading your notes.  I&#8217;ll find your books too!</p>
<p>Once I do I&#8217;ll be blogging about it on the idea girl says wordpress &#8211; my writers, book review blog. <img src='http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I hope you have videos on youtube, I&#8217;ll post them on my site as well.</p>
<p>Great layout on your site.  Some sites I visit are not easy to manage, this one&#8217;s awesome. (give your page designer a pat on the back from me)</p>
<p>Cheers!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Types of Dialogue by Sophia	Wilson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sophia	Wilson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 18:17:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i enjoy Podcasting on my desktop PC. it really helps me share my ideas and thoughts over the internet.&#039;*</description>
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