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	<title>Comments on: The Inciting Incident</title>
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	<description>- A Blog by Syd Field</description>
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		<title>By: Simon</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/2009/10/16/the-inciting-incident/comment-page-1/#comment-231</link>
		<dc:creator>Simon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Apr 2010 20:08:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michael - Unless you&#039;ve found 2,500 dollars can I suggest you opt for Mr Field&#039;s suggestion on P.293 of Screenplay: &quot;You want the initial feedback of two people you can trust. When you&#039;ve incorporated their suggestions, then you can send it out into the market&quot;. Full marks on actually &#039;finishing&#039; the screenplay though!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael &#8211; Unless you&#8217;ve found 2,500 dollars can I suggest you opt for Mr Field&#8217;s suggestion on P.293 of Screenplay: &#8220;You want the initial feedback of two people you can trust. When you&#8217;ve incorporated their suggestions, then you can send it out into the market&#8221;. Full marks on actually &#8216;finishing&#8217; the screenplay though!</p>
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		<title>By: Jean</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/2009/10/16/the-inciting-incident/comment-page-1/#comment-228</link>
		<dc:creator>Jean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2010 01:34:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Of course he will...for $2,500.  Go here - http://www.sydfield.com/evaluations.htm.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Of course he will&#8230;for $2,500.  Go here &#8211; <a href="http://www.sydfield.com/evaluations.htm." rel="nofollow">http://www.sydfield.com/evaluations.htm.</a></p>
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		<title>By: Michael Oakes</title>
		<link>http://www.screenwriterscorner.com/2009/10/16/the-inciting-incident/comment-page-1/#comment-97</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael Oakes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2009 02:45:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Syd,
I&#039;ve had your book for years. Have written a dozen one act plays.
Have just finished my first Screenplay.
Your insights are clear and crucial.
I&#039;d love to have you help me revise my script.
Any chance of that?
Thanks, either way.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Syd,<br />
I&#8217;ve had your book for years. Have written a dozen one act plays.<br />
Have just finished my first Screenplay.<br />
Your insights are clear and crucial.<br />
I&#8217;d love to have you help me revise my script.<br />
Any chance of that?<br />
Thanks, either way.</p>
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